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This is cool. Everyone else has pretty much said what I was going to so there is no use in repeating it. Other than that great job. Keep Writing!! :D

HAHA!!! I LOVE THIS!! It sorta reminds me of that movie "He's Just Not That Into You." Great Job, I give you props for thinking of this all on your ...

I am not really familiar with the story but now, I want to go read it. I loved how her tone was something you wouldn't normal hear from a person ...

HAHA!! This was interesting. I laughed through the whole thing. The only think i did have a problem with was, the driver. I wanted to know more about him. Like ...

This was a cute, funny, and entertaining story. It was a great pick me up, becaue lord knows I needed it. Haha. Anyway, just those few nitpicks that was said ...

I could totally relate to this poem. I've always loved books myself. This is good. But something doesn't flow quite right. I can't really figure it out myself but hopefully ...

I liked this, you don't see love portrayed in society today like this, usually it is something that is glorified and something everyone wants. But this showcases the flaws and ...

I LOVE THIS!!! Especially the songs, i was singing them myself and everything. HAHA. Keep Writing!!! :D

Ok so everyone else has said what I was thinking or going to say. I honestly think your friend will LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know I do :D. But is Boyer ...

It's okay honey.

LOVE IT SISSY!!! I'll help you with the next chapter tomorrow after school.

Thanks. I couldnt have done it without you

Chapter 3: The Center of the Earth As we are riding towards the entrance, my stomach starts growling. “Dad, can we stop to eat somewhere? I’m like so hungry.” I ...

FABULOUS!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! keep writing so i can keep reading!!! :D

Aw!!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE that i met you. You are the friend that ive always needed!! and YES GOOD BYE WRITER'S BLOCK!!