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Wow. I can like totally relate. And first thing is first, don't change a thing. This was so full of emotion and feeling I am crying as I am writing ...

I read this earllier but wasn't able to put up a review. So here it is. I like it. It was very interesting. The ghost /out of body expirence was ...

OMG!!! ok so you like really need to finish this because I love this and so want to read more!!! You had me on the edge of my seat!!! The ...

I am so confused...the point of this is what? All i hear is old timey cussing. So im confused right now. uh...

It will make sense later in the story. I can't be giving stuff away!!! Even if you are my sister. Haha. You are gonna have to read just like everyone ...

My Title suggestion: Gone! . Other than that you had a few grammar and spelling mistakes. Overall this poem was interesting. Keep Writing!!!! :D

I actually thought this wasn't cliche at all. It was cute. Everyone pretty much said what i was going to other than that great job. Keep Writing!! :) P.S. You ...

It didn't really live up to the title. I thought it would be something shocking. I wanted a WOW factor. but other than that. it was a pretty good. :P ...

Chapter 4: The Telling As we were driving down the road towards home, Zackariah had found his dad who I didn’t know was actually Lucifer himself. Yeah, just my luck. ...

This is beautiful. I loved the imagery. This was very interesting. Everyone has said what I wanted to so, I'm not going to repeat. Other than that, great job!!! Keep ...

WHOA!!!!! This was mindblowing!!!!! I honestly wish I had epic poet skills like you!!! I didn't find anything particularly wrong with this, i was too into to care. Haha. Keep ...

This was very interesting. I can totally relate. I still wanted some background on the characters though. Like the other times he said I love you. and i think they ...

This is a really good poem. I could relate. I don't have enough time so I'm not going to get technical. But the one thing I did want to know ...

This poem is interesting, it has a good message thats not really out there these days. The only problem I have is the flow is off. I don't know if ...

This is cool, I can totally relate. Keep up the good work!! :D