Qoh16

AW! You left it on a cliffhanger! But this was really good. I can't wait until chapter 12!!!! Good luck and keep writing, cause I'll be waiting!!! :D Qoh16

Im sorry but i cant say i liked this. I didnt hate it. But i didnt like it. I guess it was too personalforme. But i u where the girl ...

HAHA!!! I thought this was hilarious!!! And of someone who sees this all the time in my school, i can totally relate. But i don't wear those types of clothing ...

This was a very cute story, although I personally think it should be longer, put more substance into it. This story has great potential. I did like that you included ...

All I am going to say is you need to PM when Chapter 11 is up!!!

This was a really good story. The title kind of threw me off a bit. Other than that good luck and Happy Writing XD :D Qoh16

I honestly was confsued. I couldn't figure out who was talking half the time. But once you fix that, I think it shall be a great story and you should ...

This was really good. But I am wondering where this is going. It is a very interesting start. Needs a little work but a really good start. Hope you post ...

Aww...this was really cute. It was a good read. But I think you should expand more, just a little bit On their friendship and such. Other than that, this was ...

Akasha Hectate Manhattan, Akasha daydreaming while in the Council Meeting "I'm in no mood for lovemaking, Akasha. I may be old enough for such pleasure, but I'm not in a ...

Akasha -In her apartment/house in Manhattan "I hate this place. I miss Kemet. Well I guess I should get out of bed." I sigh. My thoughts drift to last night, ...

OMG...THIS IS BEAUTIFUL

I WANNA SEE THIS MOVIE SO BAD!!

OMGGG!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

Name: Akasha Hectate Age: she looks about 20 but she is actually 720 Race: Vamp :) Appearance: light brown skin, hazel eyes but her eyes change color in certain lights; ...