QiGuaiGongFu

Didn't understand what? I'd be happy to elaborate- send me a PM with whatever questions you have.

Embellish. Embellish embellish embellish. Theres almost more dialog than action or storytelling, and thats a bad thing. Diolog is easy, and doesn't say much. Take it one section at a ...

The forest was dark. Hakimemashte! Kakiga ski desu! My ass was flatter then, and less round. If i were ripply, I would be stronger. Shit.

ok comma this is easy period All you have to do comma is replace every single piece of punctuation with the written word period Everything else is exactly the same ...

I dont have a way of scanning artwork, as I'm at college, and without a scanner. You could use paint solvent. I dont know how it will effect colored pencil, ...

Same thing here as with the others. Your relying on line work to display shadow. You lose a lot of the potential depth that way. Especially with Lupin, the picture ...

Your work is great dude. but, one point of critique I do have is that all of your line work seems to look the same. Your shading is all very ...

Best time to make a choice is now. But then again, you don't care, do you? I'm Jack, by the way." he extends a hand for a shake

(you!)

(eh what the hell, i'll join in too.) "Yanno, thats bad for you." Jack stepped, seemingly out of nowhere. "Do you think your getting back at someone for that? Or ...

The hobbit is probably the best book in the series, i would reccomend reading it, just because its worth reading again.

im related to Dunkan! i hail from the Macnaughten Clan, who held castle Fife some time before Dunkan came along.

Incan. WTF are you talking about? Everybody re-tells or incorporates old stories into their own literature. the last new plot was used up before written language. incorporating mythology into stories ...