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This has a good rythm, and I can almost sense a beat here, but I had trouble understanding the point to it. I feel the last line could use a ...

Just because you don't mention me, does not prevent me from keeping an opinion on the subject. Debate and serious discussion, NOT your personal Jerry Springer wet dream. You can ...

You actually haven't made any sense yet. If you can't laugh at yourself, then your taking yourself too seriously. And clinical studies show that those with a more serious attitude ...

Arent we a little old for ninja's?

There is a law in the united states that allows for a judge, as part of a sex offenders sentence, to force the sex offender to inform all of the ...

This has the potential to become very interesting. Right now though, it is overwhelmed with poor gramatical choices. The first sentence "The night was cold and foggy" Is terribly cliche, ...

I would not welcome it, and would in fact detest and lement its existence. And, for future reference, we know what the board has done, and what it was for, ...

While this stayed very true to the topic at hand, the action is broken up so sparsely. I felt like you needed a longer paragraph or something, just to keep ...

This isn't bad. There tends to be an excessive ammount of descriptiveness. Your telling us things that we either already know, can conjecture on our own, or don't need to ...

Isn't that assuming that carbon deteriorates at a steady rate? What if it doesn't? Carbon deteriorates, along with a multitude of other elements and chemicels at a predictable rate. Its ...

How, exactly does Sureal's original source not prove anything? That proves a lot, actually. Its not just a claim, its supported with pages and pages of evidence.

That comes in the form of notes from a geology class I took last year. We went into great detail about it, however. There is plenty of information out there ...

No, most boys start puberty at age 11. Most girls start at 9, and can have their first period as early as 8. We can actually tell how mature you ...

She's a mod, and you are not. Live with it or leave.

Well now that you have said that I will not visit the link but really, Its no worse than most of the horrible poems posted on YWS. If his opinion ...