QiGuaiGongFu

Semicolons generally don't work while someone is speaking, and since this entire piece is someone speaking, or at least, that's how it reads, semicolons would be too much of a ...

This was a little hard to understand. I didn't really see a main plot line, aside from the fact that he wanted a cigarette. It was hard to understand the ...

This isn't really a short story. It reads like a journal entry. I think you have some good building blocks here, but as it is, it reads like someone talking, ...

Maybe you do. I do what I do, and I enjoy it when I do. Fear is a tool used for protection, when you realize that you don't need that ...

you got that out of three words? Your reading too much into things. She was just making a statement. everything we have came from singularity, not necisarily nothingness. You cannot ...

Op! you've caught us. The whole world is out to get you branden, and we congrigate here! please And if your going to make such a thread, it doesn't belong ...

if you DONT want me to argue, then DONT post in the debate forum. Where, exactly was that taken from? I said it doesn't happen in this country. That article ...

Where did you get that she thinks you dislike her religion from?

Or we could just DROP IT, which would be a much more intelligent idea.

I'm going to stop responding to your posts until you calm down a little bit.

You need a lot of work with basic grammer, punctuation, and spelling. Fix that, and I'll be happy to critique this.

These are all state statutes, and will differ depending on where you live Consumption of alcohol is 21 probationary learners permit is 15, 14 if you live on a farm. ...

There is absolutely no way to prove the existance of god, scientifically or other. Short of god appearing in times square, there's nothing you can do. Even then there would ...

What the hell did that have to do with anything, snoink? And if it isn't obvious that branden is taking himself just a tad bit too seriously, I think you ...

GAL!! you stole this from me!! *very angry face* QGGF Any artwork, an fiction piece that isn't romance. PM here only. I not leave any uncritiqued work, other than that, ...