Pyxis

I agree with Ofour and Jules the jester. It was okay. It could turn out to be really great, but I can't really tell yet. Swingwing=swinging (right? :P ) :elephant:

Illith jerked in her restless sleep. Words rang in her head, telling a riddle, a clue, the beginning of a journey. I am here, you are here, Are they there? ...

:lol: :lol: Loved the chaos and disorder in this poem! Amazing for that age! :lol: :lol:

I liked this I really like the idea that one action can create a chain reaction. Some of it wasn't very well-written, but overall it was very good (and I ...

Chapter 2 King Achilles threw a long, keen knife down on the map planning an attack on Lepordanda, the country Thevan had been warring with for the past six years. ...

Thanks for the suggestions! I will double space next time.

lol... poor toothbrush I agree, longer would be nice :lol:

I liked it... very funny. You should do more things like this with fairy tales :lol:

Cool! I loved it. I am a huge Harry Potter fan myself. You should definately keep writing this. :D :D :D

sorry i accidentally posted this twice :oops: :P

Chapter One The Fire Whisperers Achilles was, at the best, an outcast. He was merciless and cruel, and would go to any lengths to achieve what he desired. What Achilles ...

I liked it. I would make sure it wasn't too much like Eragon, it reminded me little of that. :)

Nice one! I loved Addie. It was very funny :D