Pyxis

WOW! That is very, very, very, good. (I would add more verys, but I don't want to annoy anyone) You were nervous about posting that? 11/10. I can't wait to ...

Great introduction. Most dragon books are fantasy, so this one should be really interesting. I can't wait to read more! 10/10, definately :D :D :D :D

The best display of abstract art I have seen in a long while! :) Better than mine (literally) :) :D :)

Wow... you really improved it from the original version. The first one was repetitive, and you managed to get the same message across in better words. :) :)

Really like it- It would make a great song for a feast in a book (I'm not sure what you were planning to use it for) and it was very ...

I liked this... Very mysterious The ending was, I thought, unusual, but good. I liked the mystery. I would give it 8/10 :D

I use pen... I can't use anything else. Pen just feels right. I copy my stories onto the computer, but other than that, only pen. :) :)

Chapter 3 Cyle jumped onto his swallow, Jadel, and flew off at a tremendous speed. He was delivering an important message to Queen Angelina, the ruler of Lepordanda. It was ...

weird... the only problem is that you can only read it once. Then it's boring. But the first time it's good. It's creative and funny. I like it. :)

lol... all I have to say is :lol: :lol: :lol:

okay... I agree with what the others are saying. I liked it, though. Cute beginning, sad ending, odd poem. But not a bad poem. :)

love it... very peaceful. can't wait to see more of your writing. :D :P 8) :)

Cool- you are way better at drawing than me. I love the landscape! Zinadine Zedane is very cool also. :D 8) :D 8)

:D :D :D Love the dramatic ending. Can't wait to read your first chapter. "Grelt" is a great name. :D :D :D

I really liked this- the plot seems promising My only problem is the name Deski-it just doesn't seem like it would fit into the time frame. There are some minor ...