Pyxis

The last one... I usually spend my time cooped up in my room reading and writing, though you may be able to find me outside, doing archery... Other than that, ...

I do wish I would get more, but I feel I get the right amout- you can't expect much when you're a new member.

The whole story won't be like this, as it would be more difficult to convey the plot. It's not edited at all; just a random thing I thought of today ...

Wow... best photography I've seen in a while. The ones with cats in them look a little awkward, though. :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

These are good, but they struck me as more superheros than acrobats. Also, at the bottom of the forth, it's labeled "Character Name", so you should change that to Alexzander. ...

:shock: Totally unexpected, but I loved it. I don't think the bit about the guard at the end was necessary, it would be a very dramatic ending without it, leaving ...

Note: I changed some of the name's on Meep's suggesetion. I tried to make them fit the Medievil time frame changes are: Jessica to Katherine/Kate Achilles to Thane Emma to ...

I liked this. It was very sad, though. I am feeling bad right now, after reading this. I really liked this, but I wouldn't post only sad poems. 8/10. Keep ...

I agree with everyone else. Do be serious next time. If you were serious, the addition at the end did not help at all. I don't think any of us ...

I wrote this for school and thought I would put it here. Please crit. ******************************* My Room My room, my comfortable cloud of chaos, cluttered with clothes and collectibles My ...

:? I didn't like it. It just wasn't well-written in any way (not that my writing's any good) If you sang it to your children when you're older, it could ...

I don't know. I've never really had enough money to go... I guess that I would .~Jessica, main character in The Dragon Shield Where were you born and in what ...

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Great.... again. can't wait to read more of this. Amazing beginning. 10/10 :D :D :D :D I am ...

I really like this. Very dramatic. I would give it 9/10. If you edited it once or twice, it could be amazing! :D

umm... Okay. The comma/period thing was weird. "stuff happened," didn't fit... but people have already said these things. You should keep writing this, but make the time period clear. And ...