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I am only sometimes in the mood, and forcing it ends badly. (sorry, had to do it. *shuts up*) seriously, though, if you can't write then maybe... you should give ...

^^or life failed them? Some males can pull off the eyeliner.... and some really, really can't. It has a lot to do with just the clothes you wear in stiff ...

I know what Gib means, about the singsong-y thing. I don't what makes it like that, but it does have it and it's pretty irritating. i do like the pretzel/robot ...

It was pretty well-done, but not exactly the most original thing of all time. Over all good job, and sorry I suck at critiques.

haha. that is some seriously awesome stuff.

pop-punk. and rock, not like pop rock but actual rock. uh, and don't take offense to this anyone, but country needs to go crawl into a corner and die. So ...

No. I've never seen a case where marriage was more than lies and a slip of paper - Kari What do you want dead and gone more than anything else?

please deal with the meter issue. i am begging you. i could love this poem to death but it really does need some help at the moment.

a) this poem is amazing. cute (as in a good thing) and professional at the same time. very well-done. write more soon. b) Wars just words torn in a cloud ...

i agree with all above, and i think (but i just type 'thinked', so i don't know if you should trust me) that you did just the right amount of ...

i know what you mean.

i write because it's why i'm not lying in the dirt right now. it wasn't ever a conscious decision, it's just something i do. i would make some lame comparisons ...

around 320, at last count (yes i actually counted all the books in my room. it's a rather long story i'd rather not get into.) i'm po' now and don't ...

3 am is when i start coming up with awesome stuff. 'course, i'm not actually coherent at that point...

'handwritten'? isn't that like what they did in 1218?