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Re: I don't exist!
Hey! I really liked this poem. It's very simple and seemingly plain. But the more you read it you start to realize that it is stating a lot of big ...
Sep 29, 2011 -
Re: Night of Perfection
Josh, I'm working on it, I just have to get into Rice first!
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Conquered
I loved this poem. Every bit of it. I really appreciate the fact that you managed to excellently convey your emotions in so little words. That honestly requires so much ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: A Day On Daddy's Motorcycle
I love this poem...honestly. Its so simple yet beautiful, it really evokes the feeling of the breeze rushing past your ears and the sun shining on your head. Yet its ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Dark Pharaoh
Do you hate me now? I don't care For now you know I'm always there. I really liked these lines in the poem! They're actually very emotional, sort of a ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: I'm Better Alone
In the distance he calls me Like some home sick melody Fights the breeze to get to me But he won’t ever beat the trees I’ve left and I’m not ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Dancing Among Dreams
Ah, I loved it as always! The way the poem reads and sounds is almost flawless. Its literally like listening to music and hearing each stanza sort of patter against ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: Ballad of a twisted mind. :)
I really enjoyed it! I like the conclusion it came to at the end, it was a very good way to sort of wrap it up. Can I just say ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: The Edge of the Universe
So much emotion, too hard to handle I’m moving past devotion and Moving onto scandal I’ve left all reason at the door I won’t speak words any more I’ll stay ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Night of Perfection
Well, you know, it was amazing. Like I said before, I really like the depth of the poetry without it being overwrought. Its simple, yet the language you use to ...
Jul 7, 2011
