PurpleHeart

Thanks guys! I'll fix the grammatical stuff when i get the chance, and i know a lot of it might seem confusing, and hard to read, but its a really ...

Just close your soul Disregard the passing lies It's safer if you just stay dead Nevertheless, come be alive Its dangerous to feel the joy Because depression is it's brother ...

I've read this over and over again at least 8 times Matthew. I absolutely, without a doubt, love it, more than anything you've ever written. I've cried everytime i've read ...

Haha thank you(: I'll revise it tomorrow... hope it'll help a little bit guys! ps. I Love You As Well.

Woah. ^_^ *confesses* i avoided this piece for a long time, even though it was in the "featured works" section, just because i thought it would be some weird love-of-math ...

july4ruby, I really liked this poem! TThe rhythym flows really well, and the words work together quite nicely. The emotions are displayed very delicately and very strong - good combination! ...

Heyy NDivz! First off let me say that i absolutely lovedddd this poem! :D Overall, the flow of it is spectacular, the emotions are constant and very well described, the ...

Thanks for the comments guys! Matthew; I'm glad you liked it(:

Thanks JRaye! I'll try to explain the lines (i could see how they might be a little confusing) "The thing that's haunting Is me without you" What i mean by ...

This is completely spectacular! i agree with the above critiques, about grammatical changes and altering the flow in some places... and there's nothing i really have to say other than ...

What hurts the most Is what's untrue The thing that's haunting Is me without you. Right now my world is perfect My smile is not pretend But how long 'till ...

I really like the changes you made to it since you first wrote it; i liked it then, but now it's just that much more spectacular! I still think someday ...

Lele If I had nine hearts Would it push me to love? Would it make me bear the gifts He sends me from above? -these two lines seem unfitting for ...

Matthew(: I know you wanted more a response, but when i posted that i was quickly running out of time... so i'll respond again. This is so incredible! i think ...

SilentRain - i really enjoyed this! It was romantic, and tragic, and somewhat cliche, but not necessarily in a bad way - and it wasn't sappy, which is refreshing. haha ...