PurpleHeart

Hey guys! Thanks for the positive reviews, i was kinda worried everyone would hate it, so im glad it wasn't terrible. I'll work on revising it so it flows better ...

My heart has been a toy for you A cheap entertainment at best So now I'll kindly ask you To unclench your greedy fists. You told me that you loved ...

Hey There! I wont spend any time on grammatical stuff, because the other's have already got it covered(: I just want to say that i felt it was kinda rocky ...

This is a really great poem! You really took the emotion and drew it out and explored all the feelings that go along with it. I do agree though, that ...

Hey! I liked this a lot! Like Bolshevik said, the personificition is excellent! You had a good equal amount of time on each of the emotions, but i cant help ...

Spectacular!! Nothing i'd criticize! I love the imagery and the adjectives you used... :)

Kat train... yeah, those last 3 lines were my signature. and i wasn't making excuses, i was, and still am, completely sure of my piece, and i was just telling ...

i wrote this on the spot in like 8 minutes... tear it up if you want to. i dont care.

I never meant to let you down. But i did. I took the girl you believed in, the girl who had so much potential and hope; and i broke her. ...

You guys can't understand, so dont say you do. Matthew... this is really good. It is different, like you said, but i like it. There's nothing else i can really ...

[quote="bookcutie"] Rejected - i like the simplicity of the beginning Realizing what he just said is Exactly the opposite of what you wanted him to*, you want him to Just ...

Heyy - FIrst Off: I LOVED THIS! A long time ago, something like this happened to me, and you so expertly captured all the emotions and questions and thoughts... you ...

Hey! For only 15 minutes - Excellent! :DD I really liked this - the emotions were flooding which is something i personally crave in poems. I think you did a ...

Absolutely spectacular! Whether you read it in your head or out loud, the rhythym, the rhyming, the flow, the thoughts, its all just right! It's so simple, but there's definitely ...

Fabulous job! I dont see anything, really that i'd change about this; its a little vague in places, and then in some, a lotttt of detail, which kinda makes the ...