Purple-Pippo

“But I really need the toilet mum!” whinged Kelly, particularly emphasising the word “need”. This didn’t matter to mum, she just let the comment pass her by. “Cauliflower, Braburn apples, ...

omgudness, ure all having the go at ME! so i was new, yeah, i'm over it now, i made mistakes, i argued i-whatever. yet, you guys, all seem to be ...

omgudness! i never ever sed anthing like tht... it all started just bcoz u sent me a txt saying spaces---or wotever..... how do u delete accounts? none of u r ...

enmew

the only reason i am flippin is because ppl kp flippin at me... now stop talking 2 me ure gettin me more flipped off

soz, even tho i DID NOT mention tht i am the "best" but, if you think i am, thts gr8!

haha! trust me it aint coz of the "questions?",

argh, forget it i'm quitting this website

OK!!!! EVERYBODY BLUMMIN LISTEN 2 MEEE! I AM not NEW TO WRITING I HAVE BEEN WRITING EVER SINCE I WAS BORN JUST TO LET YOU KNOW, EVERY TIME I ADD ...

i'm American, we spell it like that

I mope in through the backdoor, dumping my bag onto the worktop, and dragging off my cardigan onto a heap in the armchair. Calm, soothing music surrounds me from seeping ...

cool! Edited by Adam_Atlantian Don't spam storybook threads. Feel free to ask questions, but don't clutter our story with your overuse of the letter O. Thank you :)

Some amazing adjectives, adverbs, verbs-the whole thing! Great use of alliteration-yet not too repetitive! Want to know more about this 16 year old.....! Carry on writing! You're great x

erm very American not sure if it's a good thing or bad thing some grammar mistakes but storyline seems OK carry on writing!

I saunter past the rows and rows of romance, science-fiction, fantasy, action and humour. I pass Old John, the oldest member of the library. His face resembles the most primogenital ...