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  • Other » General, General Re: Thee Ex - Boyfriend

    I must say this is rather touching and I really liked it! But the grammar and all those other errors just bring it down. You shouldn't place spaces between the ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Begin Again

    I would just like to it about love? I believe it is, and for some reason it fit that perspective to me-am I making sense-no, I never do. Hi I'm ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Wayfarer

    I would just like to ask; What is a wayfarer? The word struck me as alien, or maybe I just haven't got a really wide vocabulary as I like to ...

    May 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Beautiful Disaster ~A Twilight Fanfic~

    I was a 'lil thrown off from the "twilight fanfic" at first but I am really glad I came in to read this! IT IS REALLY THE BEST THING I ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I Bear My Soul In This

    This is rather an emotional poem, and definietly well written! I must say, I was captivated within, actually the first word. My eyes were glued and I couldn't take them ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Your Hygiene (A Jump then Fall Parody)

    I must say, I have never heard the song before but I might just have to look it up. The problem with that being I'll sing this song instead of ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: vomitspit

    Firstly, a great way to show why being a vegeterian help! Though, I personally, could never turn away from a big juicy peice of steak ! Applaud for the Title! ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Memory

    I am not the best a poetry, and often never read it though I must say, this is very good! I found myself captivated on the first sentence, something very ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: random absurd story

    Firstly I must say this is funny! I was really off my seat for the whole time. But as dictation states, I must review and the grammar used in this ...

    May 6, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The White Knight Chapter 3(B) The Training Begins (New)

    “That is your dominant side. You need your stronger hand to pull back on the string. Therefore, you hold the bow in your left hand. That is your bow hand. ...

    May 6, 2010


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