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Re: Thee Ex - Boyfriend
I must say this is rather touching and I really liked it! But the grammar and all those other errors just bring it down. You shouldn't place spaces between the ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Begin Again
I would just like to it about love? I believe it is, and for some reason it fit that perspective to me-am I making sense-no, I never do. Hi I'm ...
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Re: Wayfarer
I would just like to ask; What is a wayfarer? The word struck me as alien, or maybe I just haven't got a really wide vocabulary as I like to ...
May 7, 2010 -
Re: Beautiful Disaster ~A Twilight Fanfic~
I was a 'lil thrown off from the "twilight fanfic" at first but I am really glad I came in to read this! IT IS REALLY THE BEST THING I ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: I Bear My Soul In This
This is rather an emotional poem, and definietly well written! I must say, I was captivated within, actually the first word. My eyes were glued and I couldn't take them ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: Your Hygiene (A Jump then Fall Parody)
I must say, I have never heard the song before but I might just have to look it up. The problem with that being I'll sing this song instead of ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: vomitspit
Firstly, a great way to show why being a vegeterian help! Though, I personally, could never turn away from a big juicy peice of steak ! Applaud for the Title! ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: The Memory
I am not the best a poetry, and often never read it though I must say, this is very good! I found myself captivated on the first sentence, something very ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: random absurd story
Firstly I must say this is funny! I was really off my seat for the whole time. But as dictation states, I must review and the grammar used in this ...
May 6, 2010 -
Re: The White Knight Chapter 3(B) The Training Begins (New)
“That is your dominant side. You need your stronger hand to pull back on the string. Therefore, you hold the bow in your left hand. That is your bow hand. ...
May 6, 2010
