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Hello, I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter. Information: Genre: Fantasy Title: Ecole des Monstres Link: Thanks, in advance.

Hello, I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter. Information: Genre: Fantasy Title: Ecole des Monstres Link: Thanks, in advance.

Hello, I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter. Information: Genre: Fantasy Title: Ecole des Monstres Link: Thanks, in advance.

Hello, I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter. Information: Genre: Fantasy Title: Ecole des Monstres Link: Thanks, in advance.

Hello, I am currently writing a new fantasy novel and would truly appreciate if you'd review the first chapter. Information: Genre: Fantasy Title: Ecole des Monstres Link: Thanks, in advance.

Ecole des Monstres: Chapter I – Rain Drop Ending. I clasped the form within my hands, the bus' engine revving ever so slightly as it turned down the country path. ...

Aurellia Rose White/Tsundre: I blinked in confusion, what was Deus on about? If that was his real name...The girl looked up at the boy beside her, her eyes wavering slightly. ...

Aurellia Rose White/Tsundre: "A life! What do you mean by I owe you a life." I tried to make my voice come out strong and defiant, and not as if ...

Aurellia Rose White/Tsundre: My knees wobbled as I pulled myself up. Grabbing onto what was left of my seat, I stumbled back, my eyes glued on my mothers body. Smoke ...

Aurellia Rose White/Tsundre: The food cart trundled past my seat, my mother sipped at the champagne in her gloved hands. The woman behind the cart moved quickly behind the royal ...

Ooo I didn't think anyone was going to join. We'll start soon, never the less the rather small number. Maybe I could wait a bit, though, we will definitely start ...

Name: Aurellia Rose White. Though, she tells everyone she is called Tsundre. Age: Recently turned seventeen Gender: Female Appearance: Personality: Born and raised a tomboy, Aurellia doesn't live up t

Status: Accepting Characters & Starting Clockwork Heart "Train 819." Elbrooks bent over the telecoms, his teeth gnashing violently in fear as his colleagues and him watched the show before them ...

Wow! How can you draw so well. These are really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really ...

Rather moody and sad if you ask me...But I must say, I do believe it is well done. Believable-no, but a great drawing-yes. I would reccomend you work on the ...