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Re: Flocked Meadow
Hey. These are some nice photos. They are in focus, too! On the first one, I suggest taking out some of the snow on the bottom. It's a bit much, ...
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Re: Hong Kong Sunset
Hello. These are awesome photos. The first one is a tad bit out of focus. Since you say you took them from the airport, I'm assuming that's it's through a ...
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Re: More Photography
Hello again. :D I just love the first one. I love the effect of having something in focus in the front and out of focus in the back. It just ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: My photography...
Hey. ^^ First off, these are some photos with some potential! The first one was my favorite, but I think you showed a more upward angle at the tree that ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Bunnies!
Those are both very nice. The second one looks better. There's not much else to say... ~Timea
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: All About Lee
You're awesome, Nate. I must thank you for the rest of my life for creating YWS. ~Timea
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Comments Sought On YWS
I don't think that YWS is outdated at all. I've seen plenty outdated ones, YWS seems to be pretty much on top of things. (Though considering this age, anything that's ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: 'lo all
Hello. Welcome to YWS. I think everyone else covered everything. ^_^ Have fun! ~Timea
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Two New ones
Ooo! Those are some nice shots! The focus is a bit off in both of them--the lower half of the pic in the first one and mountains in the other, ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Bittersweet but Beautiful
Hi! This is a very powerful poem with excellent word choice and imagery. ^_^ Good work. A life in a face, how odd— a bittersweet opus of ivory and blood. ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: I'm one of those new ones..
Hello and welcome to YWS!! PM me or anyone with any questions! Read over the FAQ and guide to become more acquainted with the site! So what kind of genre ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Sitting on the bank of the River Styx
Hello and welcome to YWS! I'm Timea. To get started, you should read over the FAQ...and make sure you read the rules beforing posting! Write, have fun; this place is ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Snow Photo 1
Hello. The snow is very pretty in this picture. It is a bit busy, though. There are two many snow-covered objects in the picture, that it doesn't stand out as ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Red Eyes- Chapter 3 Hitsugaya
I'm back! Toshiruo's eyes widened. "You can see hollows?" I believe that Hollows need to be capitalized. Like Soul Reaper. You keep spelling Toushirou wrong. The brown haired girl stared ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Red Eyes- Chapter 3 Hitsugaya
Konbanwa, Lizzy-chan. Critting as I go: The white haired boy opened his eyes, to see he was in a log cabin room. You need a hyphen between "white" and "haired". ...
Apr 16, 2008
