PsychicNinja

Hi Lume-chan! It sounds like a good beginning. I'm kinda confused though.....you introduce Terra...then you bounce into the story. I also don't get it-how many people were in this dream? ...

Why does everyone only like the Old Republic era?? But anyways, Star Wars fanatic (me) has a suggestion. Why don't you basically portray the Sith side of the story? I ...

Okay, I think I posted it right now. Note: This galaxy has had contact with the Star Wars galaxy. THE INTERGALACTIC WAR SERIES: BOOK 1: RISE OF THE REBELLION Prologue ...

This is my prologue of my sci fi story set in a different galaxy. Note: This galaxy has had contact with the Star Wars galaxy.

Okay...saber chucks....no. Anyways, I read through what you guys are talking about, and I like it! So this is going to take place in the time of the Old Republic ...

Hello! I really like this as a prologue, but some sentances were a little confusing. You switched back from 1st person to 2nd person. I like the idea of this ...

Hi! I liked how you used the teenage girl talk, but I think you over used it a little. You just need to clean a few grammar things up here ...

oh...Star Wars! What is this forum for again?

Hi! I love Star Wars books, and I have read a lot. This is for posting reviews on Star Wars books you have read. Oh, and please, no spoiling! ~PyschicNinja

Original! It's kind of confusing though. I like the 'pen rolling' thing.

Hi, my name doesn't really matter, cuz you can't pronounce it anyway! :( Just call me PsychicNinja, everyone does. 8) Basically, I love Star Wars and Naruto. (for more on ...