PsychicNinja

Hmmm... Okay, a few things. 1) Vader...um..yeah, what Hunter said. (I really don't want to repeat.) 2) It's a little confusing. Why is Vader all mad? (This is the first ...

Oooooo! Very good, Alanna! But there are many grammar mistakes! And sometimes I had no idea who was talking! Would you clean it up a little, please? You NEED spacing! ...

haha!

Well, I just fixed some of the grammar stuff! Hope it sounds better! ~Timea

Ok. Thanks everyone so far for your comments. I'm going to try to fix the grammar up when i have time. As for the abbreviations like 'docs', that stands for ...

no problem! 8) :D ~Rogue Jedi Master Timea

Once again, this chapter will be posted in two parts. Oh, and here are some pronunciations: Ceer: s-eer Lira: Lee-ra Zorrac: Zorr-ack I think all the other pronunciations are obvious. ...

Hey Mark! Hm..i'm a tad bit confused..but I'll do my best! I don't really like fantasy that much, but this is a good story! I like the description. ~Timea

Hm..Heather..that's my brother's job. We are sort of writing it togehter.. Actually he's feeding me some ideas...and I write it! Kwest is modeled after him. Here are some pronunciations: Lira=Lee-ra ...

yeah. The people who I did those mini-stories about are going to come into the story later! :D That's why I wrote them in. It was kinda like in Episode ...

Nope. Don't see the point. I mean i've never seen one! ~Timea

ok I've seen these movies recently: Gracie-inspirational and very uplifting at the end..but sad at the beginning and during the middle. Nancy Drew- a good chick-flick The Fantastic Four:Rise of ...

Gamer!? Heck, yeah! I love video games!! Hmm..i don't think i have a favorite game...but i mostly like RPG...or games like Clash of Ninja or Ultimate Ninja (those two are ...

All right! I just got a Wii a few days ago! We were searching for it forever!! It's so awesome! So far we only have Wii Sports, Wii Play, and ...

Transformers is the best movie of the year so far!! CG was amazing! It's in my top 10 all-time fav movies! (Star Wars takes up most of the spaces). ~Timea