PsychicNinja

I liked your other poems, but I'm not a big fan of this one. It's a little long. And you repeat the the chorus too as a song it would ...

Rofl. 9/10

Ooo, cool. Can't wait for the new movie. 10/10 Liam Neeson!

Sorry, Joel, I don't do storybooks. I didn't say it was going to be one, either. :D 8) Oh, and guess what, my brother (ninja-Z) is now going to help ...

lol 8/10

The '...' there was just a typo, I believe. Thanks. This is supposed to be a prologue, so it's short. Technically, it's a flashforward into the future from where the ...

Naruto Fanfic: Through the Still Night Prologue By PsychicNinja Warm blood on cold skin. A kunai driven deep into an opponent’s chest. The hoot of an owl. And a full ...

Had to leave, but now I'm back. Her eyes went in and out of focus and she could barely tell whether she was moving her arm or her leg. You ...

Hi, Jessica. Here to crit again: He had black hair and eyes and, she noticed he and the other genin wore Hidden Leaf forehead protectors. You put the comma in ...

Haha. 9/10 lmao ~TIMEA

Hey! I just finished critting Audra's story... So I'm critting as I go along: The storm let loose a torrent of freezing cold rain. Lightning flashed across the sky and ...

Konnichiwa, Audra-chan! Critting as I go (again): Itachi could not grasp the possibility of that. Neither could Ayumi. It was impossible to birth fire from water, wasn’t it? Nonetheless, it ...

Konbanwa, Audra-chan! I'm extremely happy to finally begin reading and commenting on your newly reworked story!!!!!!! So here, I'm critting as I go along!: A rifle discharged; the bullet splintered ...

Konbanwa, Audra-chan. Here to comment on the last part of your first..draft?..of Ayumi. I'll get to critting your reworked story after this ^_^: Realizing she had let the Byakuugan fade ...

Ya know, I totally missed this when I first started re-critting these posts, Audra..but I critted them anyway, so you can probably take a few hints or tips from there. ...