PsyLynx

I like it. It's pretty and short and has good rhythm.

any advice, Chevy?

I also took away a lot...most of the first part was removed, and I'm currently undecided whether I like it more or not. It's different.

Schizm I. Plunging through the nebulae, under the veil of a black dust cloud for infinities that wrist-devices measure, stares a lonely asteroid: Me. The Darkest Hour. Has it always ...

this felt like a classic, a lot like one. It was flavorful, had new and cool language used naturally, had a nostalgia and a beauty all it's own. Congrats, yo.

I like "And my mind is in decline" and "For fate, hope and reason Irregular heartbeats Twisted feelings The rain almost an aphrodisiac Just acknowledge me please" everything else didn't ...

that is absolutely beautiful...very complex, great images, just....mmmm! Like a snowflake only not cold, or really like a snowflake, except in it's temperature which was cold. nvm, I liked it.

um, no. I didn't like it, it was just....sigh. I want images and metaphors and a story, not just talking, not just talking talking talking.

It's so painfully mundane...you try to spice it up by saying the same old same old in new ways, and...you do say it in new ways, or at least with ...

I really like it a lot. Good job.

I love this, I'm bookmarking it. it's yummy.

I can definitely relate. Like it a lot.

Wise Cotton-Candy Quest My imagination fingers the crevasses of my mind, poring through memories with ice-cold fingers that make me scream in sexual elation. My memory massages; in, out, perfect ...

It's also spelled Buddhism, not Buddism. Minor mistake.

yes. If the democrats used him for it, it would hurt christianity too. "Thou shalt not do as they do in Egypt" --Leviticus