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Re: CATTAPILLAR. the uncut version
it's too short to get me to care. I care about characters once I get to know them. It's just a moment of something larger, of an entire world....it's like ...
Feb 10, 2006 -
Re: Prismatic in Darkworld
absolutely incredible imagery. I wish I could figure out what it meant. But the imagery was stunning enough that it's like music....you don't have to understand it's message in order ...
Feb 10, 2006 -
Re: Laugh. Dream.
a men. A men. The greatest defeat I've ever had, and the stupidest thing I've ever done, was when I let myself believe that adults were living the right way, ...
Feb 10, 2006 -
Re: 2-5-06
ever read A Clockwork Orange? No. Bezoomny is a word used in it. It's beautiful, so I used it. The stuff that can be misconstrued as philosophy is basically all ...
Feb 10, 2006 -
Re: Chill of the Night
I disagree with everyone. Forbading? Please. That's NOT A WORD. I like the poem. I like how it is, and don't think that anything should be changed. It feels...creepy, sad, ...
Feb 9, 2006 -
Re: Let My People Stay
I don't know. I felt early on like this was trying to make me angry, and in return, I got angry at it. Hamas, yeah, that's bad. They won, yeah, ...
Feb 9, 2006 -
Re: 2-5-06
thank you, I hadn't noticed and it is an excellent point. :D oh, and thank you. :D :D :D :D
Feb 8, 2006 -
Re: Mellow Tragic
Eyne is an archaic word, it's in Shakespeare a lot, it means all a person's eyes. I use it to include the mind's eye. I think you can do that, ...
Feb 7, 2006 -
Re: Vision
vision is spelled...vision. Not visioin. But a small mistake... I love it. It's...very powerful and excellent. "Delicate beauty...dreaming a vision of death" and "where the sun and moon soar/While cha
Feb 6, 2006 -
Re: 2-5-06
2-5-06 I. We never read the shapes of words anymore, nor the succulent-smooth taste nor their echoey sound in mighty cathedrals nor their color, black and infinitely warm and sinful ...
Feb 5, 2006 -
Re: Mellow Tragic
Mellow Tragic 2-5-06 Mellow Tragic Down a deep dog’s eye hear the street wrinkle, solid expectation give the world to this tumbling sky. Yesterday, I imagined and I thought I ...
Feb 5, 2006 -
Re: Aquarius orthodoxy
it's ok, it shows that you have talent, but it doesn't feel like it's really focusing on anything that's worth a damn to me. Gimme something my heart can cling ...
Feb 1, 2006 -
Re: Vast and Lonely Spaces
I'm naive? Oh dear, I'm screwed up already without learning more bad adult news.
Feb 1, 2006 -
Re: Greatest Haiku Ever
spiffilicious!
Feb 1, 2006 -
Re: Vast and Lonely Spaces
Vast and Lonely Spaces 1-31-06 Now all expectations have bleeded, burnt to the ground, and all is empty sky, lonely space, far-off stars a’twinkle some dancing in binary bliss, and ...
Feb 1, 2006
