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Re: A perfect goverment
I thought about this quite a lot a couple of years ago. I guess I still think of it some. Incandescence, though, is insane and none of his ideas are ...
Feb 24, 2005 -
Re: Death Wish
as a fellow sci-fi writer, I feel obligated to tell you a few things which I've learned. First off, one klick (if that is how it's spelled, I honestly don't ...
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: Listening to Your Stories
hey, it be good. I likes it, anyway. And yeah, it doe tell a story. And I appreciate the notice that it wasn't supposed to make sense; save me the ...
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: *Sleeping Heaven*
I liked the concept, I loved the idea of sleeping heaven....of your sleeping reality, but you didn't do anything with it, instead you just did this cliche love thing that ...
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: The Perfect (MAJOR CHANGES)
I liked it. Very pretty, easy to read, good words, good story, etc. I didn't focus on it closely enough to find anything that I would improve about it, which ...
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: Half a Tank of Gas
it surprised me, a little bit. It was close to getting to be redundant, close to being too....I don't know, just dry of ideas, but it wasn't either of those ...
Feb 21, 2005 -
Re: (Deleted).
I...the language was pretty, the rhymes were pretty good, there were a few gramatical errors that only bug me because in daily speech, I use them, and that disconcerts me, ...
Feb 19, 2005 -
Re: A Thursday Afternoon
12-9-04 Home smells percolate in the fresh hot biscuit bliss-drive explode with the world in a mind too full of wonder to be afraid of the screaming outs and ins. ...
Feb 19, 2005 -
Re: My pics
You've converted from TYWC too...neato. I liked the first two...and think that the second will be awesome if you redo it, spend some time on it, which you obviously didn't ...
Jan 31, 2005 -
Re: In the Castle
Yo. That's actually pretty good, younginlator.
Jan 31, 2005 -
Re: wordance
sweet as hell. Damn, this site kicks TYWC's ass.
Jan 30, 2005
