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Re: Bone-White Responsibility Skeletons
4-23-05 With stars, low and rolling and night, high and boiling with crashes of silent thunder strumming his electrified mind, are awakened new days, old nights, the ancient splendor of ...
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: Love in P-land America (OVER SIXTEEN)
however, there is no way that this is five-stars good, no way at all. Someone hurry and give it a shitty review so it's overall more accurate.
Apr 16, 2005 -
Re: Satan on turtle's back
once, I spewed in the shape of an angel...I think that God lives in my genitals...
Apr 16, 2005 -
Re: Love in P-land America (OVER SIXTEEN)
it is a monologue. Shakespear had tons of those. Pardon me for not fitting into your narrow definition of poetry. Poetry is anything you want it to be. There is ...
Apr 14, 2005 -
Re: Battle of the Bands
definitely Smiley Face Erotica.
Mar 17, 2005 -
Re: George Bush Fans
you're a rude, insensitive douchebag. It just bugs me because everyone is, (and yes, I have been too.) Stop it, it's annoying. You know nothing about the world, I know ...
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: Life
very oriental. The sort of piece that's supposed to tell you, "okay, I've said that. Try to understand it, you probably do understand it, now try to put the peices ...
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: Thoughts
Welcome to the club. I've experienced that same thing. The confusion of existence and having compassion and being happy while everything around you burns down. Or something. There is a ...
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: ten years (very...pathetic...I CAN'T WRITE ANYMORE!!!)
yeah, I thought it was kind of lame. . .meh. I just don't think that you had anything with it.
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: prayer
I didn't get a lot of it....why you said some things, what they meant in the poem, you know. Sound to silence, light to dark (forgive me if my paraphasing ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: She still waits
the language was boring. . .I don't know. That's my only real complaint. The story is, of course, sad. Spice it up, maybe. Make it sadder, make the work lonier, ...
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: The Secret Keeper
spruce up the language. Still, it was pure in its....hmmm...write for a couple years, look at it, and you'll know what I mean. Pure means that you mean it. Later, ...
Mar 8, 2005 -
Re: Love in P-land America (OVER SIXTEEN)
obviously the profanity does alienate any audience who is totally against that on purely moral grounds. But I can't show those people poetry anyway. Sigh. The battle over censorship. I ...
Mar 5, 2005 -
Re: Love in P-land America (OVER SIXTEEN)
*sigh. Well, I liked it, at least.*
Mar 3, 2005 -
Re: A perfect goverment
sigh. I was on topic. There are hundreds of thousands of years of human history to which we're blind. We look at a few cultures and say that we know ...
Mar 3, 2005
