PsyLynx

absolutely hilarious.

I don't know where this should have gone, and Dramatic Poetry felt the best; if you disagree, just go wit it please. Thanks :D God’s Night-Time Moon Jingle 6-28-05 Falling ...

I honestly don't know which poetry section this should fall into, so if you don't think it fits here, please just go wit it. :D Depth & Love, Respectively 6-28-05 ...

good, man. Don't ever feel bad for posting anything. Hell, don't feel bad for anything that you can't change, ever. Hell, don't feel bad. Now that I've endowed you with ...

Yes, I liked it. It though it was for children...but there was nothing about it that made it so that adults shouldn't read it. I liked it, a lot. But ...

6-22-05 (First day of summer) The night sank with a fast, speedy train cycle and his mind didn’t know itself anymore, it was good, it was Eden, beneath a moon ...

I can relate. And I'm going to tell you something and I don't know if you're going to believe me, but a friend of mine told me the same tale, ...

Why has nobody else commented? I like this a lot; it does capture a lot of writing...the loneliness, the fact that often, we must force ourselves to do it, and ...

I think that you need a hug. *Hugs you*

comments from someone, anyone? Please?

I love "sweat-mirrored walls of my mind" But the poem, overall, didn't leave much of an impression because I couldn't tell why the narrator was feeling the way they were, ...

It seems like you have a lot of talent, but yet you forced this, like you consciously decided to write a poem and consciously decided what it should be about ...

I wrote this while falling asleep with my eyes closed, and my favorite color is orange I think.

it seemed trite to me...really trite...but I can't help you out, so I'm a turd for telling you that, sorry. Do better, because you can.

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