PsyLynx

freedom 3-23-06 Freedom relax, lie back or stand up meditate on the nonexistence of all things, rise to the top of a high city building and scream into the pouring ...

Sorry, this post was contrary to two rules of YWS, including swearing and behaviour to other members and has been edited out. Firestarter.

I... am not allowed, by pride, to like any poem named "For Jesus" ... with that said, good poem, I liked it.

oh, in case anyone else ever looks at these, I should say that... I wasn't the person who invented the flaming pie image. Paul McCartney did, and he named an ...

That's...awesome. So good that I actually finished reading it and decided to comment on it. That's rare. And I love this.

simply beautiful

I have to confess that when I wrote this, I never thought I'd type it out. The last couple lines, about how awful it was, was just what I really ...

Sick Day 3-3-06 Sometimes, I celebrated so long, called to the heavens so loudly, and danced so ferociously that I thought the echoes could never die. But now the echo ...

that's pwetty. I love it.

hey, I'm open to some. I worked on a lot of what Xantham said... but some things are permanent. ho hummm.

I've added an extra m to hum, because I don't want it pronounced "hum" when reading this, I want it pronounced, "hummm." I figure if I have three m's, you ...

Bubble Bath Surprises 3-1-06 Some days, I feel like failure– tar bubbles in slimy asphalt, and I try to fly over it, but instead sink into my dirty goo. And ...

I hate the phrase "on a daily basis", because you could say...well, "daily" and have it mean precisely the same thing. I don't care so much in daily conversation, but ...

I like them...it's all style, Xantham. It's not too common in...the poetry that is written by ordinary poets these days, but there have been times when they were pretty common ...

I love the first and last stanzas, absolutely. The second two...are necessary to the story, I do think, and there's nothing wrong with them at all. No, nothing really at ...