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Re: Samsara
Samsara Senator Sky, A letter arrives, informing you that there is hurt. Trembling through the mail systems, arrives a tear-stained letterized cry. Dabbed with blood, insurance that it’s real. Petit
Oct 10, 2005 -
Re: DOOM ROOM !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (OMG PLZ READ!!!)
DOOM ROOM I am slandered, slayed, sprawled out, I shudder, am splayed, I am crucified under the arrogant weight. Stop, Bob-Fucking-Dylan, cuz I know that amphetamines screamed in the late ...
Oct 10, 2005 -
Re: i slit my wrists for Jesus
I laughed my ass off.
Sep 30, 2005 -
Re: Sex, Drugs and Rock n' Roll
I hate this. I hate 'maturity' and I hate 'wisdom'. I...don't...get...them. People have told me that I'm a deep thinker, and what that means, I have absolutely no idea. I ...
Sep 30, 2005 -
Re: two-thousand-and-five-survive
I really liked it a lot. Loved the emotional crap thing.
Sep 29, 2005 -
Re: Our Love
I didn't think it was good at was pure cliche, and not done excellently. It rhymed, had meter that was not flawed, I'll give you that...but that's not poetry, erm, ...
Sep 28, 2005 -
Re: There Used To Be A Word For This.
It was pretty good and powerful, and the only thing that kept it from being better was that...I can't quite say, but it didn't really flow...you repeated lots of the ...
Sep 24, 2005 -
Re: Inspiration!
I like how it flows, thank you very much. And I've decided whether I want it to rhyme or not; sometimes I do, sometimes I don't. Suck on that.
Sep 24, 2005 -
Re: Dancing with the Lightning and Thunder
If you corrected all the errors that Snoink said, then there were still a couple, just nitpicky proof-reading things. Blah, though; unlike him, I really don't care about that. This ...
Sep 24, 2005 -
Re: Approaching The Singularity...
"in reality, nothing is factual"..... um, Brad....hate to say it, but you sound completely nucking insane to me.
Sep 22, 2005 -
Re: The Official Goodbye/Departure Thread
NO YOSHI, DON'T GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *Gasps!* *Chokes!* *Twitches!* BLAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNN
Sep 21, 2005 -
Re: Inspiration!
Inspiration! 9-21-05 Possibilities blossom, curling roots extend lightning zings as my mind sings everywhere and everyone will hear this call. Heaven is this manic excitement, while my future is huggi
Sep 21, 2005 -
Re: Mysterious Door
dreams are so cool....I don't think that I've seen any dreamish visionish poems on this site before, which makes this particularly cool, and the ending be good. I'd type more, ...
Sep 21, 2005 -
Re: A simple request, all, please listen.
Yawp, news on TV is something I've been wanting for years....
Sep 21, 2005 -
Re: Jailbreak
It's great, it's the most exciting poem I've read in a long, long time...not that I've read many poems in a long, long time :? But it's great, flows excellently, ...
Sep 19, 2005
