ProfessorRabbit

Thanks for the reviews, guys. I'll admit that you're right. *sigh* I have such a problem with originality. No matter how well I do with the actual writing, the stories ...

Welcome! Can you enter notes into an iPod without typing them on a computer first? *curious* I didn't think that was possible. Anyway, two reviews, one story, blah blah, you'll ...

I knew the ending the minute I saw "bride-to-be" and "uniform." However, I do like your use of repetition. The way you use the same descriptor ( "bright, crisp Sunday ...

Never mind. :P

Never mind. :P

Just another vampire story. I hope it isn't too long... Anyway, R for language and a bit of violence. Some sexual innuendo, but nothing overt. Enjoy! EDIT: Incidentally, this is ...

Don't mind me, folks. I'm using this character to write up a story, so I dug up his profile from the RP site for which I originally created him, and ...

In line 2, I'd suggest removing the comma. Now, as far as narration here, the 2nd and 3rd lines seem out of place. It would make more sense if they ...

I'm getting a little tired of having that rule quoted at me. *pout* I've posted two or three reviews already, and not a single work of my own. Lay off ...

Knock yourself out, Gahks. I don't mind at all. :) In fact, I consider it a compliment.

Only one thing: "Dying while writing this rhyme" The words "while writing" slow down the rhythm of this poem. I'd suggest something like this: "Dying as I write this rhyme." ...

I remember these! Vaguely, anyway. They started off well, but by the third or fourth in the series they kind of started... sucking. And am I really the only one ...

Catseye! That's the one I was thinking of! And, of course, I own the Enchanted Forest Chronicles. And the Chronicles of Chrestomanci, irrelevantly. I haven't heard of any of those ...

Okay. I'll start with some fixes: "I clutched my jacket tightly as a bone-chilling breeze went through the now abandoned streets. It once had been a grand city with neon ...

I believe the Harper Hall trilogy was my introduction to the world of the Dragonriders, and a wonderful introduction it was! XD I've also read Decision at Doona; sometimes I ...