ProfessorRabbit

I don't get it, but the Ace Defective part is amusing. 5/10.

It can't hurt. Draft out your final novel, and you'll be able to lay down hints as to what will happen later on in the story in the other two. ...

It really depends on how the time travel is accomplished. We'd need more information before we'd be able to say one way or the other.

3/10 for misspelling Shakespeare.

Wise, your review is complete. And I'm now open for business again, though, as always, I can't necessarily guarantee a swift response.

In the magical forest where animals could talk and play, Paddy, The friendly rabbit, "The" should not be capitalized. One day they were in a field of tall, green grass ...

Banned because that's not the most annoying song ever. *evil grin* *sings* This is the song that doesn't end. Yes it goes on and on my friend. Some people started ...

Banned for being below the legal age of consent anywhere except Japan.

There are some doings that cannot be undone, some mistakes that cannot be unmade, some decisions that you just can’t go back on. Good, strong beginning. This was one of ...

The body dropped with a sickening splat inside the plastic bag that contained it, conjuring up the most unpleasant recent memories Cadel Lorens had ever had the misfortune to remember. ...

She hurried through the streets, hands stuffed into the pockets of her heavy coat; a stream of frosted breath following her trail. Either change "following" to "followed" or change the ...

The hovering moonlight shone over her, and it was clearly seen that it was a girl, with long dark hair and a pale face. Seen by whom? I'd reword since ...

Cherubim laughed wildly while he played whit the Apple. Typo. "Whit" should be "with." That was something Michael would never understand: Being three thousand years old, Cherubim always behaved like ...

Amber was poised in a fashion that appeared both intensely comfortable and alluring. Her long legs could be seen, peaking out from behind the large, rosewood desk, as glossy as ...

That's where signatures generally are, lol. Meh, 3/10.