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Re: Welcome to the Dark
I found this poem absolutely brilliant. I was awe-struck the whole while. I wished I could write like you. You set the mood, your rhymes were perfect and you dazzled ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Priyansha risking embarrassment
Sorry for the stupid poem, i was feeling very sad today. Poem No. 2: Lost friends Faces fade away, names are forgotten, old photos in old albums start meaning nothing, ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Priyansha risking embarrassment
Poem No. 1: Title When a poem, I sit down to write, A title for the poem, I have to find. Should i write about the ponies who hopped all ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Music and Lyrics
Riya sat on a rock about ten feet away from the sea. She tried to push back tears as she looked at the waves, the moonlight playing on them and ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: I can't make you love me.
Hi, I liked the story. I found a few mistakes here and there so I'm just going to point them out now. I haven't read the other reviews so please ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Halloween Night
Really fascinating. Makes me want to know more. I don't or rather can't write fantasy stories myself, but I love reading them. A few suggestion now. In the second paragraph ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: We All Fall Down
I saw a few grammatical and spelling mistakes while reading your article but I'm not going to point them out. I know you didn't post this article for that. I'm ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: The Deranged Bibliophile
The first stanza's about harry potter, second one is about the chronicles of narnia, third stanza's about percy jackson and the fourth one is about twilight. The book I'm reading ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: The Alarm
I loved your poem. I could completely relate to it. I think all of us, everywhere feel a burning hot hate for the alarm clock in the morning.
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Escape (or Wings, which one do you think is better?)
I know the last two stanzas seem as if they don't belong. I'd love suggestions about how to change that. Sometimes while sitting idle When there's nothing much to be ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
i really liked it. i was enthralled the whole time. the ending is just lovely. i don't understand the title though. i understand how the story is centered around the ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: The obsession
i understood what your poem was about while reading it. it reminded me of the poem 'mirror' by sylvia plath, but maybe that's because i've just read that poem. i ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: When I Should Be Paying Attention
When the teacher is blathering on and on about something of which I don't have the remotest idea I pick up my pencil and start scribbling. A girl with four ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm new here and I'm a nervous wreck
My name's Priyansha and I'm an aspiring 15 year old writer from India. I've written since I was seven but I've still got a long way to go. I'm really ...
Mar 21, 2011
