PrincessOfDarkness

TigerShark: WOW! Thankyou sooo much for that comment! :D It was so nice! Woah, I really didn't think it was that good, but that's just probably because I'm a perfectionist. ...

Can someone include me? I'm not sure how to start, :? It doesn't matter who. :)

Yes, that sounds good! Will we POV on this thread, or on a different one? If we DO POV on his, read the spoiler: Lidz' POV I am sooo thirsty. ...

AAAAAAARGH! MOOOOOOOOOOOOORE! Unlike the first comment, I am threatning you to write a third part! :D Haha! This is great! I noticed a lot of giggling, it got on my ...

ThankYou again! Your comments mean so much, really they do :D :')

Sorry about that. When I first wrote it, I had an introduction as to who that was. Sorry I forgot to add it. :( Well, basically it's one of Sam's ...

I agree with SOCKS (xD) and I, too, love the last transition! It was really, really clever. About the tenses, I get it alot too. I mix up present and ...

Well, you now like when you sit in a padded chair, and the air kind of rushes out of it? That what I defined as a "Wumph" noise, because the ...

If you can take constructive criticizim, open the spoiler: Where was the Drug part going? I didn't understand that bit. I think that if you perfected some spelling mistakes, and ...

Wow. This was great! I can see about the similarities between our styles. This is an awesome vampire story...are you planning on continuing it? I hope so. I'd love to ...

Thank You Roxy. Wow, I never expected so many people to like and comment in such a short while. Thank you all, I feel all teary. :') You're all amazing ...

Thank You! It isn't- or wasn't- in my opinion, the best short story I've ever written, but it might just be because I favour the genre I wrote my other ...

My story is about a pirate in a mental institute trying to steal a leprechaun's bag of gold Now. The searing white walls blinded me, as I dragged a calloused, ...

It was good, but don't fall into the trap I do a lot. You needn't have put a capital letter on goodbye, unless it was: "Goodbye," He said reluctantly, kissing ...

I think you need to add pauses and full stops in, but other than that it was awesome! I love the fact in turned out to be foodball in the ...