PrincessOfDarkness

Lidz ¬ I felt a bend in time, and quickly looked around for Arthur. He must of moved. Using time. Leo's comment still lingered with me, as I watched Wolf ...

Lidz ¬ Leo releases my arm, and I shoot a pained but grateful smile at Eve. My arm hurts like hell, but I grit my teeth. Eve rushes over to ...

Ermm ... are'nt you in the wrong catagory? Otherwise, I loved it! It was great!!!

Lidz ¬ It's a good idea. My eyes opened wide. Leo's teeth had become enlarged, forming fangs that glinted in the half light. I held my breath, holding in a ...

Lidz ¬ The tension is thick in the air as we near the hotel. It's big, and looks expensive. "How did you brother afford this?" I ask Wolf. "He ... ...

Lidz ¬ "Bugger!" I suddenly cried, "Ghostfire can control fire!" I remebered the candle he'd shown me. "Well, it must be his," Eve said. "Wolf, is Leo here? Can you ...

Lidz ¬ (tgirly: haha!) "Oh, are you OK?" Someone asked. Ghostfire had begun to cry, silent tears dripping down his face. "I'm fine," He said, wiping his face. "So, what's ...

Oh, I disagree! I think it did have emotion! I thought it was really good! I think you could improve the grammar (missed a few commas, full stops) at times, ...

Yeah, like I said before, it was something I did for my little sister (who is 6) so the dialouge was just a laugh, and I wanted the dialoge in ...

The rumbling is back again, it’s not just the wind that is keeping from me from hearing the words that are hanging in the air behind me. Tremulously the ground ...

October, 1997 “Happy Birthday Anna Faith!” I plant a kiss in her baby fine hair, as she smears through the icing on her cupcakes. I quickly grab the candles, before ...

Thanks! It was more of a fictional story, and as you said, I'm adding more of the descriptions and characters in later. :D I added in all this talk because ...

(LOL!) Lidz ¬ "My brother is about is about as psychotic as they come. And the rest of you will be in a lot more danger than I am. My ...

This pit I fell into, That seems like it will never end, If you can't see it there, Must all be an illusion. I'm just wondering: Is the last line ...

Lidz ¬ "Wait!" I cried, "Don't leave!" "Lidz-" Ghostfire started. "No," I wiped the sticky blood from my nose, "Without Wolf, we can't forsee what his twin will do," It ...