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Re: Runaway Elements (full)
OOC: I'm sorry (if this seems offensive in anyway) but that POV made me laugh. Just the abruptness of Seshat. She is now one of my favourite non-real POV characters. ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
Lidz ¬ Arthur collapsed from exhaustion just as we got to the edge of the forest. I knelt down besides Wolf and tried to force him awake. "Wolf ... please! ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
Will do sylverdawn! Lidz¬ I groaned, and my eyelids flutered open. I saw the eyes of Arthur, staring at me anxiously, and Eve and Rain both focused on... A fight. ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Fight for Peace (One More/Starting)
Profile: Name: Lidz Age (20-): 18 Gender (if not obvious): Female Apperance: Short brown hair and startling blue eyes. She is tall and more classed as pretty than hot. She ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Midnight (Part 2)
Like! Like! Like! I have no nit-picks! This was truly awesome! I loved it all! Please PM as soon as Part 3 is out! The countryside was a blur to ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
OOC: Get well soon! Lidz: I stirred, the shell still encasing me. I shuddered; even though the cacoon was- I found out on closer inspection- fire, it was strangley cold. ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
OOC: I'll be away untill late sunday, so I'm taking my character out of the equation for now, thanks to Leo :smt003 Lidz: We trooped north, and after ages of ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: The Haunting
I'VE JUST RE-READ SOME REVIEWS AND I WANT TO MAKE SOME THINGS CLEAR. WHEN I FIRST WROTE THIS, IT HAD A TITLE PAGE, INCLUDING WHO'S POV IT WAS AT WHAT ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: The Haunting
OoORedrumOoO, It isn't actually a real story- it was purley imagination. :) I do know what it's like to lose a fanily member though, so I guess that's why. Thankyou ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Elma, The Evil Twin of Elmo!
Haha! You want serious reviews ... OK ... xD 1. The arms are different lengths, 2. The lollipop is out of proportion 3. The mustcace is unequal! (My OCD is ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
Lidz ¬ Wolf's hand felt warm against my cheek as he spoke- like electric, shivers passed over my skin where his skin touched mine. I placed my hand over his ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: I need to buy new pencils. (Edited... kinda)
From the comments, this sounds amazing, it's a shame I can't see it. It just comes up with a white box with a cross. :/ I really want to see ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
Lidz ¬ *OOC: I have a horrible feeling I just really pissed Leo off, xD* I gasped as Wolf's body spasmed, and he gasped too, gulping for air. "Are you ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
Lidz ¬ Rain and Eve began to creep up behind Leo - Wolf - silentley. "If you want him back ... why can't you just talk to him? You're his ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Runaway Elements (full)
Lidz ¬ I felt the uncomfortable feeling of time freezing- then Arthur was gone, my nose began to bleed. "Where's Wolf?" I dmeanded, feeling the wind whip around me desperately. ...
Jul 12, 2011
