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Re: Shoot the Dove
err.. wow.. at the begining of your poem it sounds like your begging people to read it. it doesnt give out a good message. also, in the third line, you ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: When Your Parents Cry
I loved it!!! you speak the truth and thats what i like about it! it brings emotion and meaning to poetry! keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XOXOXOXO Emma
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Conversations
Wow... im sorry, but that was not trying to be rude...but i couldnt tell who was talking half the time... :? it would be a lot less confusing if you ...
Aug 25, 2008 -
Re: Whole
I personally thought it was pretty good. pm me and tell me how long u hav been writing. the only thing i didnt like about it is that it made ...
Aug 25, 2008
