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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: When Your Parents Cry

    I loved it!!! you speak the truth and thats what i like about it! it brings emotion and meaning to poetry! keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XOXOXOXO Emma

    Aug 25, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Breathe

    Listen and hear the earth breathe, its heartbeat along with yours. And the flowers dance in rythem with it all. But as darkness creeps in, the flowers stop dancing, but ...

    Aug 25, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Conversations

    Wow... im sorry, but that was not trying to be rude...but i couldnt tell who was talking half the time... :? it would be a lot less confusing if you ...

    Aug 25, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Whole

    I personally thought it was pretty good. pm me and tell me how long u hav been writing. the only thing i didnt like about it is that it made ...

    Aug 25, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The murderer

    The Murderer Listen and listen good, for I will not retell. There is a murderer in the village, who came from the fiery depths of hell. They say his eyes ...

    Aug 25, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My poetry

    Secret to life Nobler and Nobler my dearest friend be true to yourself as you have been for me and you shall go without worries or a care in the ...

    Aug 25, 2008


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge