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That is really deep. poetry should have emotion and meaning in it. you really showed both and more! You are a great poet! :D where did you get such inspiration?

Robert frosts Walk in the fall :lol: i luv his work

I loved the way your rhymes flowed! you have such talent. I hope i get to see more of your work! :) u rock!

This free verse is very unique. You must try to make your lines more equil spaced and maybe this poem would sound better with rhyming. :D you should try writing ...

You certainly use words most people dont understand :) but thats okay, as long as it sounds good, then its a poem. this poem however, was a little strange to ...

OMG that was the greatest romantic fiction story i had ever read! if u are writing a book, or have already written one, tell me, okay? you have some raw ...

Bering Sea The Bering sea so deadly and amazing beautiful and frozen water, oh so bold The Bering sea many lives its taken each soul is forever gone everyone that ...

Well... it was origional.. im sorry but that was the weirdest poem i had ever read. you should write another type of poetry, or write stories instead. im not trying ...

Peepholes from Heaven Stars are peepholes from heaven, shining God's light down on us during the darkest of times. Even the cruelest of people stretch their arms for the comforting ...

OMG you are a great poet! where do you come up with stuff like this? the only critique i have for you is when the girl fell, why did she ...

OMG that was really good! you have some serious talent! :lol:

What exactly is this poem about? I'm sorry i cant see what it means. keep on trying though.. it sounds very poetic.. :wink: XOXOXOXOXO Emma

Wow! you have some skill! :o the only think i can say is that you said people fantisize in the begining of two verses. other then that, you rock! XOXOXOXOXO ...

OMG i loved it!!!! It has emotion and meaning, something every good poem should have. and it spoke the truth :lol: loooooooved it! XOXOXOXO Emma

err.. wow.. at the begining of your poem it sounds like your begging people to read it. it doesnt give out a good message. also, in the third line, you ...