Princess

This poem is the best poem I have ever read! :D Keep it up! :smt023

OMG you are a great poet. this deserves to be in a published best seller book!!!!!!!!!

I loved it!!!! :D you are one heckofa writer. the only critique i can give you is that you need more details... but you gave me totall chills!!!!!!!! im still ...

OMG you have some skill!!! when i read that poem i started laughing.. and at the end i was in histerics :lol: you should write a book.. i looooooooved that ...

Personally im not a big fan on rhyming poetry...espesicially every line rhymes.. this one was not bad though.. but every rhyme seemed forced... you have to let it flow.. make ...

*sigh* This is ironic...... people trying to understand god are wasting their time..God made himself incomprehendable because if people understood him, they would underestimate him..and they would cha

As i said before, you rock at poetry!!!! this is the best poem i had ever read! :smt026

Dude!!! you are a serious poet! This poem is the best poem ive read in years! where do you get such inspiration? i want you to pm me asap when ...

Hi! you are a very unique writer! now, to the critique...you need details! what did the girl and the guy look like? how old were they? what were their NAMES? ...

OMG every word in the bible is true! You have to have faith to get that its all true! :shock:

In Iraq solders shoot without mercy roads explode constantaly fathers die without question children and wifes mourn and then one day.... heads turn upward as a burst of fluffy white ...

rhythem rhythem rhythem! :lol: if it had more rhythem, it would be the perfect poem! you have a knack for writing down your feelings down on paper. i should be ...

I loved this story!!!!!!!!!! if you are going to write a book, pm me asap, okay? :lol: omg i praticially shivvered when seb started to take her shirt off.. you ...

This speaks the truth for millions of girls all over the world. i love the way the poem contains meaning and emotion! i really feel for anybody who gets that ...

Tears roll down my face as I listen to the radio They are telling all who had died in the country at war My father was a nice caring man ...