Princess

Okay, I am currently addicted to this book.. Please keep churning out these chapters before i go through withdrawal! :wink: Anyways, I dont really see anything wrong with this chapter, ...

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!! This one is the best one out of all the chapters!! I didnt find anything to correct!! good job!!

Wow.. This chapter was better than the last...The only thing i can say is that when Lilat did the fake exit thing, can you explain a little more please? how ...

Wow!!!! I loved this story! You are a guy of many talents.. But there is one thing i must point out is that the acid thing, i am currently taking ...

I know.. When i was at church camp, we all were praying around the fire,silently,(yes we do that) and i was praying for to have doubt vanquished in my life, ...

No way.. that's bogus. Its just pure coincidence :x

Hey clueless! lol.. I love this poem! you expressed what many people are terrified to say. I admire you for that. :D There is something about this poem that screams ...

I loved this movie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cried like a baby. My favorite part is when Allie and Noah were laying in the road, and a truck came up.. it was hilarious. ...

Jane’s Animals My shoes clap like a baby’s hands---------------just a bit cliche here as I enter the new house. In San Diego we never had wooden floors and rows of ...

For all the Teens in school, do you have any embaressing stories? if so, write them here!! Write juciy stories that make people want to :thud: Not really a debate ...

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OMG, that was the best story i had ever read! you have lots and lots of skill!!! and as for the name, i think you should either name it Unshed ...

Oh.... :x will she be the first girl VP?

Still.. But shouldnt you listen to him too?

okay..erm.. please try to be more specific... :?