Princess

Thanks for the reviews guys!! :D

Personally, i think its just cruel to call other people retarded.. I would hate it for people to call me retarded.. One of my best friends was called that, and ...

Ive been published.. But im not sure if winning a poetry contest and then having your winning poem published counts.. Eh..close enough..

This is a great poem! the only critique i can give you is: "Come, shadowed dreams Lock away my sanity" Those are the first two lines, and they should rhyme ...

I loved this piece!!! It was very very good.. I cant give any critique to it.. It explains the want and need to be together, and It is awesome.. WOW. ...

that one made me laugh out loud! that was pretty good, and the only critique i can give you is when he asked the audience if they read his bio, ...

Okay, here are the two greatest series in the world ( in my opinion) Harry Potter and Twilight Which is better? Why? *please only comment if you have read the ...

Wowowowowow! this one was even better then the last one, and thats saying something!!! Great work!.. and seriously, once again, if you EVER plan to make this into a book, ...

Twilight all the way!!!!!!!!! that whole series is awesome! i read it over and over again!! loved them!

oh wow.This poem is so deep and heartfelt.. It actually made me cry..The only thing i can critique is that, if you are going to have rhymes, then do rhymes ...

They can flavor bubblegum... Ever hear of Double Bubble? its a type of bubble gum, but they change the flavors.. Hmm.. interesting critique, but apriciated all the same

This is a great poem! I love the idea for it! the only thing bugging me is the use of rhymes in this poem.. At first, it started with all ...

Wow! while i was reading this poem, i instantally thought " Twilight "..Were you writing this poem based on the book? It is very good.. The only critique i can ...

Love and Bubblegum Love is like choosing bubblegum while wearing a blindfold. Some will be sour, and some will be sweet. He might betray you or he might enchant you. ...

Wow! you certanley can go deep! this poem is filled with emotion, it brought tears to my eyes.. the only thing i can critique is that when you said people ...