Princess

10/10 for being awesome!!!!!!!!

Great poem!!! I really loved reading it!!! As for the punctuation advice, I suggest that you type out your poem in story format and then add the punctuation as needed. ...

Name:Christie Ann Lamprey Age:21 Outfit:Wolf Pack Profession:Leader of Wolf Pack Gift Level:9 Personality: Very serious, always looking about her for enemies. She is a great leader and has lead the ...

Yeah guys. Jeez.. Keep to topic.. :wink: Twilight vs. Harry potter... Hmmm.. They both are unique in their own ways.

oh yeah! I rule!! TPBM has read one of my poems

Princess goes and tries to calm down snoink from her sugar rages

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Okay guys! I know we all have problems trying to get a good subject to write poetry about, and I have came up with a few for you! 1. Winter ...

Hey Esteria. This poem, to be quite frank, is rather flat. It to me is more like a letter saying "get up and lets go!" and that's all that it ...

I think this is a very good humorous poem about how baseball is always there and you cant get rid of it. Firstly, do not start each line with a ...

hehehehe.. This Haiku made me laugh.. I have some advice for you though. Do not do ...'s while haiku. It sends the wrong message to readers that the dot dot ...

Hey there Explosive! This poem is pretty good, but it lacks emotion. This poem talks about regret, but shows none. Length is needed to perfect this poem. Show what happens. ...

Goodness! These chapters are barely a paragraph! You must think about lengthening them! We need more insight on Blair's past.. Give her personality.. Give her feelings.. Right now the only ...

Hey archer! I normally don't do critiques on stories, but here I am! Details!!! This is what you need most in the prologue of this story.. It makes it hard ...