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Re: The Night Club (Curious Fangs)
*Did you read my last post? I interrupted you, tehe* Sia "I..I guess," Sia didn't quite register everything the girl had said. "My name is Sabrina," she purred. "Sia." She ...
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Re: Transitions
**Billy, I can't post anything until you post**
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Chirstmas Caravaan
Thaaaank yoooou! Finially!
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Night Club (Curious Fangs)
Sia Shaking her head scornfully, Sia decided this place was not worth her time. She wandered out the doors of the bar, thinking about what she had just discovered. "Oof!" ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Night Club (Curious Fangs)
Sia She stared at the man in shock. Then, slowly, she said: "How do you become a vampire anyway?" Sin stared at her, totally caught off guard. Sia shrugged. "Just ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Chirstmas Caravaan
Allie There was a tiny grain of energy within Allie. She nursed it, and nursed it, until it grew to the size of a bowling ball. Then it spread throughout ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Night Club (Curious Fangs)
Sia Sia just sat there, her mouth open in shock. Unanswered questions floated around her head. She stood up, and marched over to the man behind the bar. "Where is ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Chirstmas Caravaan
Allie Time passed. Allie wasn’t sure if it was minutes or days. All she knew was that time was passing. Her chest was sore, and she felt hot and cold ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Chirstmas Caravaan
Allie Her eyes fluttered open. At first, all she saw was light, but then, as her eyes adjusted, she could see that Andi was sitting there next to her, stroking ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Night Club (Curious Fangs)
Sia Feeling and looking better, Sia strolled out of the bathroom, only to stop dead in her tracks when she saw what was happening. Two men were...were drinking a woman's ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Kidnapped
Celia She was still asleep when somebody shook her. "Celia, wake up," Kiron said. "We have weapons." Instantly, Celia was awake. She rushed to the crate and saw that there ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Chirstmas Caravaan
*lol I keep misspelling my own characters name!* Allie All was black. No matter how hard Allie tried, she could not open her eyes. Pain was everywhere. Her head felt ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: The Chirstmas Caravaan
*sorry moon about the last post.* Ali As soon as Petey and Ali were out of Andi's watchful glare, Ali breathed a sigh of relief. "Andi thinks I'm just a ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Forbidden Love
Hi Panda! Welcome to YWS! This poem does not mention, even once, that this is about gay rights. You should mention it at least once so the readers understand. This ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Forever On A Bridge
Hey God! When you come to poetry, it would be best not to mention times or dates, or the amount of time passes. It just screws up the whole timeless ...
Dec 22, 2008
