Princess

Name: Molly Age: 17 Gender: Female Appearance: 5'6 with shoulder length brown hair. Really bright blue eyes and a splatter of freckles across her nose. She would normally wear dark ...

*sputters, spitting chocolate* Oh no you didn't... *dumps a bucket of gravy over irishfire's head*

Okay, I am normally a very patient person, but I am getting a little frustrated. In the poetry section, I come across a piece that is one of the worst ...

*stumbles into forum and is shocked by the food flying everywhere* Oh my goshers!

Hello there 77479. Um. Are these supposed to by lyrics? Because they would go in the lyrics section. Thats completely different than lyric poetry. First off, you really need to ...

Hello there fell! Welcome to YWS! I would like to remind you that you must have at least four reviews per piece of writing that you submit, so please get ...

Hey there classy! *squeeeee!* I loove sob stories! Defiantly pm me when you write one! Anyways, my name is Emma, and I am your cuddly Greeter/Instructor. You can talk to ...

Hey there dearie! Welcome to YWS! Okay lets get down to it! Words flow from my pen, as blood flows from my heart. I added the as because it just ...

Hey Rachel! Welcome to YWS!! My name is Princess, Emma, Emily, or all of the above! I am an Instructor (purple people who are masters of critiquing) and a Greeter ...

Hello people of YWS and beyond! Princess is back! ^.^

Teddy Bear!

Step by step, I walk the road. My lungs have breathed my blood has flowed. 'You're still alive!' the doctors said. But as far as I'm concerned, I'm the walking ...

Hello there! Wow you are very descriptive! What I'm amazed at is that you described so much that I don't understand the story. All I understand is that there was ...

Hello there forestqueen! It's a lovely poem, but there's no meat in it. What I want you to do is add more metaphors, similes, etc. I have been in the ...

Hey silent! Here as requested! I'll review it in two sections. Emotional, and physical. Emotional: Poetry is made to make the reader feel your emotions. I sense in this poem ...