Priceless

Hi, I loved this. It was so beautifully written. I'll just second what Dudette said. :) Only thing I had an issue with were the ellipses. It's been drilled into ...

Heya Suddenly, she ran towards the frightening waves and was engulfed by the salted salty water. Eh, already been pointed out, but the formatting is off. The dialogue shouldn't be ...

Hola! ^.^ Welcome! I'm Qamar! What sort of stories do you like to write? I like reading and reviewing short stories, so you'll probably seeing me nitpicking over your work. ...

Hi there Stiv! Love your name, I'm assuming it's a parody on the Grim Reaper? :) And yeah, writers get ideas from anywhere. So welcome to YWS! You'll feel right ...

Hi there! I'm Priceless..and no, I'm not being vain. You can call me Qamar. :) Welcome to YWS!! *handshake* Warning - you might get addicted to this site. xD Seriously ...

Hi SilverNee! I like your username. :) Welcome to YWS! Isn't there a quote that says, 'There is no good writing, only good re-writing.'? :D YWS is an amazing place ...

Hi there YellowAeroplane! I wasn't here when you were around last, so hi! No one's work is perfect, right? We're just all trying to polish it to the best it ...

Hi there, The memory of my parents’ death still haunted my memories. I was so shocked. My parents were good people, and they never tried to hurt anyone. My parents ...

Hiya! Okay, this might sound a little harsh, I'm sorry. :( I'm just tryna help! ^.^ It was the summer day everyone loved, the warm sun beating on your face, ...

Hey there. Priceless here for your review. :) I've been awake for a month now and already I see the changes in mum ; she hums. Awake for a month? ...

Hey there! Me again. :D I liked this chapter too, it was great. I just have a few corrections that I think would make it sound even better: Jacksin had ...

Hi there, I loved this. It was so well-written. I didn't see anything wrong with it; I love your style. Everything was just so realistic, and I loved the way ...

Hi there, This was really eerie, and creepy. Well done!! The description was perfect, it's like I was there with the character, seeing, hearing and smelling everything she did. Awesome. ...

Hey there, This was a very powerful, very emotional piece. Very beautiful. :) Only thing I don't like are the ellipses. Avoid ellipses in a story as much as you ...

Hola! Firstly, let me get this out. I LOVE THAT SOONGG!!! Ah-hem. Secondly, this might be a late review..? Oh well. Points for Team Red!! I remember when I first ...