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“Malfoy?” Draco could not keep his hand steady as he pointed the wand at her. Tears welled up in his gray eyes. She stood as still as a statue, horrified ...

Hiya I really liked this! It was so beautifully written, it flowed so well, and it was so interesting, and erm..genuine. As in, you sounded like you really meant it. ...

Hiya! This just needs a wee little improvement. The dialogue was kind of fake and cheesy, and the writing seemed a liiitle overdramatic. I agree with confetti. But I think ...

Simply the fact that I can't do anything else. o.O

Banned for having 4 stars.

I used to be on TYWC, and I think someone posted a link to this site on the Chatwall. So I joined, was lazy, got banned for inactivity, and now ...

Just posted this to prove that real crappy fanfiction exists. o.O Inspired by the song "What Have You Done?" by Within Temptation Hermione held out her wand with a shaky ...

Hi! You is a really good writer. :) I loved this. It was so beautiful, I love your description. I noticed nothing wrong with it at all. Keep writing!!

Hiya!! The plot/idea was very cute, I've never come across something like that before. I do agree with the others about the dialogue. It sounded really fake and stilted. I ...

Hi there, This was good. Quite well-written, I just have a few little nitpick things: His eyelids were half closed, and long strands of brown unshorn hair fell on the ...

Hiya! ^.^ Firstly, it needs to be broken up into paragraphs, and like borntoshop said, a new line for each speaker. Cause' right now, it's very hard to read, it's ...

Hey there! Overall, I really liked this. The whole dream/brain thing was very unique. Creative! Keep writing, this was really good :)

Hey there, I really really liked this!! It was very interesting. Very well-written, I love your style. Keep it up! :)

Hi, I really liked this. :) It was so interesting, very well-written. That's already been pointed out ^^. Keep writing. :)

Lady in Red o.O Yeh, I suck at this.