Priceless

Hi there, Okay, this is just my muddled-up opinion, but the description was uneven to me. It's like, you started the story in a general, telling-not-showing kind of way, that ...

Hey, Really nice work. I didn't see anything wrong with it. It was very interesting. He saw his friends enjoying university while he planned to fight Admiral Periodic Table, Captain ...

Hi there, This was really good. Nice vivid description, it was so interesting. Just one tiny thing that I think would make it better: 'Run,' the voice in my head ...

Hiya! Don't even know if you'll need this review now but oh well. I liked this a lot. Like the others said, simple, subtle, beautiful. You really got me into ...

Hi there! This was good. Grammar or style-wise, I didn't find anything wrong with this. But the idea seemed, boring to me. Maybe it's cause it was an assignment, maybe ...

Banned for having that avatar.

7/10 Funny. xD

Shy, plain, humble main character - Branch Manager at fin-exis advisory Pte Ltd (Singapore) Haha!

^ Holy crap you were right! I *did* have a nightmare..well at night time for us, anyway. o.O Witch!! :D is in that giggly super happy stage of love

(I saw that edit! I also saw the post before the edit. :P) ^ claims he's evil so I deem him evil. :D is the best daym thing that your ...

^ you're wrong. :D I really should be asleep. But I'm not. V is a super nice person :P

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Banned for living in the vampire's lair.

Hi there ^.^ She was around my age and was extremely beautiful Maybe instead of saying she was extremely beautiful, you can show it. By like having him drop something, ...

How come? Banned for not considering me a friend. Hmph. :shock: