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Hi guys! Please please review this xD And could I please get some input on the ending? I think the last paragraph sucks, and the ending is too abrupt...so, advice ...

Hi there! This is fan-freaking-tastic!! Ah-hem *coughs* Yeah, I loved this. Your description was perfect, you really made me feel sorry for Charlotte. Just a few little nitpicks I noticed: ...

Hey there, Wow, this took my breath away!! It is amazing. Your writing flowed so well, the language was superb! It was deep, and really honest, like it came straight ...

Hey there! Nice job :) This was simple and beautiful. Your description was nice, and I could picture pretty much everything. I liked your dialogue too, it wasn't forced or ...

Hi there! The only glaring problem on this is I see no connection between what the narrator thinks of Wren and what she thinks of Arnie. It looks like a ...

Hi there :) Okay, so I love the idea. It seems really sweet and romantic, but I didn't like the way you told the story. You just told us everything ...

Hey there!! This was really short and sweet, and yes, a bit confusing. You're good at description, but you need to make it a bit clearer what's going on.

Hi there! This was really, really good. It was so beautifully written, so unique and interesting. It sounded like it came from the heart...which, I'm sure it did :) I ...

Hey there! I loved this. Firstly, it's true! It was very beautiful, very well-written, it flowed so well. You've got some real talent :) Sorry I can't be more helpful, ...

Hi there! Can I just say I love your title? I don't know why, I just do. It's so cool. :D Great job on the first few paragraphs, they caught ...

Hi there! :) I knew it had to be done. But why did it have to be so difficult? I think this 'I knew it had to be done' part ...

Howl - Florence and the Machines

Hey there :) I love that song!! Ah-hem. So yeah, the only thing major wrong with this was the grammar, and all the mistakes I noticed have already been pointed ...

Hey there, OMG this was beautiful! I really, really, really loved this! It flowed so well, and you really made me feel for your character, I was almost in tears. ...

Hi there! :D How come this is in the Short Stories section? Shouldn't it be posted as a novel? Alrighty.. Milliseconds overcome centuries, and sure, milliseconds could kill a centuries ...