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Why did you repeat your review twice? Unless it's a big, don't do that because it's spamming!

Heya megsug, I know that you have a lot of comments/reviews here so I will go through your chapters, read them and maybe see which ones have little reviews so ...

Why did you re post your review? You don't have to do that!

Aww thanks so much, I will be sure to go back and edit those minor nitpicks.I did think that Line 16 is very clunky but I had no idea how ...

Np, everybody forgets at some time or another! Hope this helped!If you have any questions you could always ask me!

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I have a question, what you mean in your review abot: "push the boundaries of my writing" this remains unclear to me so could you please explain?

Thank you although, I don't consider that ^^ as constructive criticism or constructive compliments. I am thinking about trying song lyrics soon (just for fun) :D

Thank you for being honest! I am excited that you are rewriting it, that's great! I know that I sometimes sound harsh I don't like to sugarcoat things and I ...

BTW Chrissy if you want to use quotes in yourE reviews to point out the nitpicks this is the bb code to do it! [quote*] Put your text here [/quote*] ...

Why are you using all of these ellipsis in this reply? Just one period is enough. I hate incorrectly used ellipsis :D

As I said, I never read any Percy Jackson series stories, so I wasn't really sure. I will edit that into my review to make it more proper :) BTW ...

Just as as comment if you want to know how to do quotes to make your review neater you use this bb code: [*quote] Put your text there [*/quote] Remove ...

Heya, just wanted to ping @Burrow to do this promised review that you never did for my friend!

No problem, Fox I really am here to help and support you and your awesome novel!