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Pretzelstick

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  • Research Re: How do I write with a FMC with a language barrier?

    I just wanted to get give my two cents here, as I am a bilingual speaker from birth. Anyways, in my experience it's quite tricky to write accents and integrate ...

    Apr 9, 2016
  • Miscellaneous Re: Dear 13-year-old me

    Thank you. This has motivated me a lot, since I have had the writers block for the past couple of months, and while still being an active member on YWS, ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Writers Corner Re: What Do You Think Is Your Worst Quality?

    The one quality that I will always hate is my: loudness. People generally hate loud people, and repel against them (at least in my personal experience-where I hear phrases like ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Writers Corner Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [A Fantasy Novel]

    * puts hands in* This one sounds very interesting. Even though I a lot of novels to follow. Is wear that I'll be consistent. I'll write one review up tonight.

    Dec 22, 2015
  • Research Re: One Sentence Pitch

    I do agree with Kyll, because I think that this one sentence pitch is very cliche, and I as a reader probably wouldn't care because it seems like it's too ...

    Dec 10, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Mentor/Helper Needed!

    I would be glad to help you if you would like it. Feel free to Pm me personally with your plot or novel or information. If you have any questions, ...

    Nov 23, 2015
  • Research Re: Publishing

    You are right, some publishing companies don't take you seriously because of your age, which is a shame because they should really inspect the quality of your poems. I agree ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Research Re: Classical Piano

    I have actually reviewed the first chapter of your novel, or WIP, so I think that I know who you are talking about. I won't try to copy what others ...

    Aug 9, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Editiors Anyone?

    If you post your chapters on YWS, I am sure that someone will critique it for you. Also, if you want to, you can go on this topic thread Here ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Writing Tips Re: Linkzude16's writing tips

    Hi Linkzude, and I also just wanted to comment on each of your points, to help you get better as a writer. Rosey has given you some valuable advice an ...

    Jun 30, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Looking for brutally honest feedback on story idea

    Well I honestly think that this is a tough character to write, from your summary since she has emotional and mental problems. You really have to get into her head,so ...

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Research Re: Fantasy Writing

    I honestly don't think that it's original. People's motives are like pattern that can really be traced back into their past. With that being said, I agree with everything that ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Research Re: Fantasy Writing

    Well, I honestly had a hard time following what you were trying to say here. The summary was kind of jumbled to me,and so I would recommend that you read ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Renaming Little Sister

    I don't know Mem, I feel like Little Sister has been the title to your novel forever now, but I understand that you would consider changing it. Just please,actually think ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Writers Corner Re: Haven

    1. What do you value over safety? Love. But maybe they are the same thing. @StellaThomas I disagree with that statement above. Just like @Lavvie said,if these two things were ...

    May 13, 2015


If you pick up a starving dog and make him prosperous, he will not bite you; that is the principal difference between a dog and a man.
— Mark Twain