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  • Other Poetry Re: In a minute

    I really liked this poem... Actually, it's different than what I've ever read before, so I found it interesting... I especially liked the facts. Altogether, a good read... :)

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Goodnight.

    I liked reading your work... I specially loved the ending... It forms a detailed picture and that's the thing I liked about it the most... Keep writing... :)

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Bigger than man

    I really liked your poem... It's really deep and touching... Since I'm not that good at reviewing, I can't say much... Still, I would say I liked reading your poem... ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Be mine

    Deep in my heart I'm concealing things, that I'm longing to say; Scared to confess what I'm feeling, frightened you'll slip away. I always wonder what you’re thinking, When I ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Invisible tears

    It's just three lines, but it has an impact. Some poems are very long and seem like dragging, but your poem was nice, a bit different. I liked it. Keep ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Don't You Love?

    I enjoyed reading this poem. You have perfectly expressed the idea you wanted to. I liked the way you play with words. Keep up the good work. :) :) :)

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A possible friend

    I liked the poem, though it seems kind of crude. The best thing I liked was your simplicity.

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A Kiwi summer

    It's a cute poem. It made me feel good because I like happy poems. Keep up the good work. :)

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: No. 4

    Wow!!! I really loved your poem. It seemed like you were playing with words. I really liked all the similes. They beautifully express what you want to say. "She freezes ...

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: One in a million

    Thank you for your reviews everyone. I really appreciate it... I'll keep those tips in mind. :)

    Mar 9, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Beneath the Smile

    Wow!!! You have expressed that thought wonderfully: 'Sometimes a person who laughs and makes others laugh would be the one having a thunderstorm of sadness in his/her heart.' Your way ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hidden Veins

    You have a wonderful way of describing your thoughts. The description creates a wonderful picture and I liked the comparisons. Keep up the good work!!!

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: One in a million

    I seem just another girl wearing worn out jeans, having big dreams, living in my own world. I know I ain’t so popular, I don’t look picture perfect, I’m nowhere ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Patriot

    I liked the sound of we are free. This poem has a really nice ring to it.

    Feb 16, 2011


the only theft here is of decency when carina decided to rob me of my pride and put me on a banana
— veeren