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Re: What Do you Want
I liked your song...The first two lines are my favorite: " I don’t understand why everything falls out Of places that we’ve thought we could keep high enough " Nice... ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: The song of my life
♪♫ I can hear the music, Don't know where it’s coming from. There’s a strange feeling of déjà vu in this sweet song. My heart seems to know The lyrics ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Tomorrow
I liked the setting... It's a nice piece... I loved the stanza: I will forever remember this whole ride But time does pass and sadly now it ends My grief ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Life is...
I really liked the idea of your poem... But I think you should use more powerful words and a bit more creative expression... Anyway, I liked your work... :)
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: The real you
I really loved it... It's awesome... We all wear masks, just to cover our true emotions... I really loved your piece. :)
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Best Friend..yeah right
Wow!!! I liked the rhymes you used... :) The ending was sad... :) But, yeah, life happens sometimes... Altogether I liked it... :)
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: The Serendipity Theory
I liked your post... It's interesting... :) The 'chances' of this theory being true are high... I'm not saying 100%, but fairly high... :)
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Title pending *suggestions welcome*
Nice beginning... I would like to read more... :)
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Little things
Thank you for your reviews, harleighblake and JRaye... @harleighblake- I sometimes use that website, but couldn't find any satisfactory word... Still, I'll try... @JRaye- In the second stanza, the sma
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Little things
Have you ever thought When you felt distraught; A trifle thing said by someone Can ruin your day or make it fun? Did you ever think this way In the ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Open, simple
I liked reading this. It's kind of sweet. I liked these lines very much: "Life isn't as simple as you make it appear Even the happy people have a depth ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Up at night
I'm not a good critic, so I won't say much... But I liked reading it. The ending lines : Don’t let worries get to you Tomorrow is tomorrow Today is ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Unique.
Wow!!! I really liked reading your poem... You are right about happiness being difficult to find. My friend once told me "Happiness is like a butterfly. The more you try ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: A Light Where There is Darkness
I liked it... It's kind of different. Good work! (I'm no good at reviewing, so can't be of much help.)
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Night and Day at once
I really liked your work... It's interesting and the message is awesome... I especially liked the lines: "Nationality does not change facts, Language , literature and arts Same heart beats ...
Mar 11, 2011
